My Life Went To Waste
It’s 2am. On the 25th of April 1915. You are probably thinking who am I. Well I’m Connor McGrath. It is pitch black. All of my friends are ready to kill and fight but I’m wishing that my gun was working but it is not. My sniper breaks.
All of a sudden there is a big BOOM!!! The boat flies into mid air and lands upside down in the blood red sea.
I’m hanging off the boat with hardly any grip. My heavy bag is pulling me down into the blood red sea. I can feel water filling my uniform.
I can feel my life going to waste. By Alex
I am learning to write an interesting recount.
I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.
It can be tricky to write in past tense.
My Teacher can help me by spell checking my story.
The next step for me in my learning is to find an interesting topic for me to write about.
1 comment:
You wrote a very interesting and vivid description of the ANZAC Landing Alex. Great job. I am looking forward to reading your next story.
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