Friday, 27 June 2014

My Speech

My Speech about Hot Chocolate


Do you agree with me that  hot chocolate should be sold for $1.00 dollar at our lunchroom instead of $2.00 dollars?


* Why is hot chocolate not $1.00 at Elm Park
school? Just now it costs $2.00 to buy a hot chocolate from our lunchroom. I think it would  be better if it was  cheaper  to buy hot chocolate because more people would buy it from the lunch room from Mrs De Villiers.  

* I feel that our school should sell the hot chocolate for $1.00. The reason I feel this way is because I think more people would buy the hot chocolate as it would be more affordable for more people.  Just now is the winter season. It is cold for everyone in the morning. The year’s  1, 2 and 3’s could  become really cold and it could be bad for them if they catch a cold, but if they were able to buy a hot chocolate in the morning this would help to keep them warm in the cold mornings and hopefully stop them from catching the cold.  Just now they can’t buy one as it costs too much.


Mrs de Villiers could be helpful by making the hot chocolates cost only $1.00 and make it more affordable for more people to buy it.


This money will go to  help the year 6’s next year so the more people that buy hot chocolate the more money will be raised for the school.


* People always seem to have $1.00 in their pockets, but when the hot chocolate is $2.00 people don't have enough money and this stops the students and teachers from buying it.


* So my conclusion— If the hot chocolate is $1.00
people will buy more and this will increase the
schools profit. Over the wet or cold winter days,
students and teachers will want to try and keep warm and drinking hot chocolate  is a great way of doing this and at the same time making profits for the school.

So my time is up so I hope Mrs De Villiers will make the price $1.00 dollar and not keep it the hot chocolate At $2.00 dollars.
Thank you.

I am learning to write a speech.
I am so proud of making my speech interesting.
It can be tricky to make your speech more than 2 minutes long.
My Teacher can help me by editing my speech with me.
The next step for me in my learning might be to make another speech about a different subject.

Friday, 13 June 2014

Kennings Poem



I have been learning to write a Kennings Poem.
I am so proud of being able to use interesting words in my Kennings Poem.
It can be tricky to spell the words correctly.
The Thesaurus can help me by giving me more interesting words than the original words I had.
The next step for me in my learning is to think of a more interesting and better Kennings Poem.

Monday, 9 June 2014

Story Pyramid Summary of "The Last Wolf" by Michael Morpurgo



I am learning to recap what we have been listening to and write a summary of it in a Story Pyramid.
I am so proud of being able to complete the Story Pyramid without having lots of help and making lots of mistakes.
It can be tricky to get the correct spelling of the words.
The research can help me by looking up the correct spelling of the words.
The next step for me in my learning is to complete a Story Pyramid using more complicated key words.